Today (March 2) we will do in-class critiques, offering feedback on a handful of projects as a large group. By Wednesday March 4, I’m asking you to complete a written critique for two classmates outside of class time. Your critique group will be assigned in class, so contact me if you are absent on March 2. Post your critiques as replies in the Blackboard threads started by your assigned group members. The critiques you write should be substantial (totalling at least 400 words each) and draw on specific examples from your classmates’ photomontages.
Use the questions below to structure your written critiques. You may choose to focus on some questions more than others, depending on the photomontage.
Arrangement
Describe how your eye moves (or doesn’t move) across the composition. You might comment on:
Focal point, or “cornerstone“: What one thing seems most important in the photomontage? What appears to be the “anchor” element upon which other elements are built?
Entry point: Similar to the focal point. Do you connect or relate to anything in the photomontage, leading you to continue looking? Or do you feel unsure about where to look first?
Static and dynamic elements: What element(s) express movement and lead your eye around the composition? What element(s) seem sturdy or grounded, perhaps as part of the foreground or background?
Please offer suggestions for improving the arrangement of the composition.
Unity
Describe your impression of the overall look of the photomontage. You might comment on:
Repetition: What elements are repeated in the photomontage?
Contrast: What elements provide contrast? Does anything seem to stick out arbitrarily from the composition?
Juxtaposition: What is the purpose of any disruptive juxtaposition, in which dissimilar elements are brought together unexpectedly? Does the juxtaposition have a purpose or is it just random?
Please offer suggestions for improving unity in the composition.
craftsmanship
Does the photomontage look carefully constructed, or do you see pixelation, ragged edges, or other rough spots?
Content
What is this photomontage communicating? Given what the artist wrote on Blackboard about his or her intentions, do you think the collage is mostly successful, or is the communication unclear?





















